King James Version, Updated™

KJV:   1 And Moses with the elders of Israel commanded the people, saying, Keep all the commandments which I command you this day.

KJVu: 1 Moses with the elders of Israel commanded the people, saying, "Keep all the commandments which I command YOU this day.

KJV:   2 And it shall be on the day when ye shall pass over Jordan unto the land which the LORD thy God giveth thee, that thou shalt set thee up great stones, and plaister them with plaister:

KJVu: 2 And it shall be on the day when YOU shall cross over the Jordan to the land which the LORD your God gives you, that you shall set up great stones, and plaster them with plaster.

KJV:   3 And thou shalt write upon them all the words of this law, when thou art passed over, that thou mayest go in unto the land which the LORD thy God giveth thee, a land that floweth with milk and honey ; as the LORD God of thy fathers hath promised thee.

KJVu: 3 You shall write on them all the words of this law, when you have crossed over, that you may go in to the land which the LORD your God gives you, a land that flows with milk and honey , as the LORD God of your fathers has promised you.

KJV:   4 Therefore it shall be when ye be gone over Jordan, that ye shall set up these stones, which I command you this day, in mount Ebal, and thou shalt plaister them with plaister.

KJVu: 4 Therefore it shall be when YOU have crossed over the Jordan, that YOU shall set up these stones, which I command YOU this day, on mount Ebal, and you shall plaster them with plaster.

KJV:   5 And there shalt thou build an altar unto the LORD thy God, an altar of stones : thou shalt not lift up any iron tool upon them.

KJVu: 5 And there you shall build an altar to the LORD your God, an altar of stones ; you shall not use any iron tool on them.

Notes: "Lift Up" highlighted in the KJV verse is Strong’s H5130 with a Strong’s definition of "wield, move tool to and fro in using it, with עַלֿ of material: כִּי חֵרְבְּךָ הֵנַפְתָּ עָלֶיהָ Exodus 20:25 (E), i.e. over stone, so Deuteronomy 27:5; Joshua 8:31 (D), and Deuteronomy 23:26."

KJV:   6 Thou shalt build the altar of the LORD thy God of whole stones : and thou shalt offer burnt offerings thereon unto the LORD thy God :

KJVu: 6 You shall build the altar of the LORD your God of whole uncut stones , and you shall offer burnt offerings on it to the LORD your God .

KJV:   7 And thou shalt offer peace offerings, and shalt eat there, and rejoice before the LORD thy God.

KJVu: 7 And you shall offer peace offerings, and shall eat there, and rejoice before the LORD your God.

KJV:   8 And thou shalt write upon the stones all the words of this law very plainly.

KJVu: 8 You shall write on the stones all the words of this law very plainly. "

KJV:   9 And Moses and the priests the Levites spake unto all Israel, saying, Take heed, and hearken, O Israel; this day thou art become the people of the LORD thy God.

KJVu: 9 Then Moses and the priests the Levites spoke to all Israel, saying, "Take heed, and listen, O Israel; this day you have become the people of the LORD your God.

KJV:   10 Thou shalt therefore obey the voice of the LORD thy God, and do his commandments and his statutes, which I command thee this day.

KJVu: 10 You shall therefore obey the voice of the LORD your God, and do his commandments and his statutes, which I command you this day. "